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"Exterminators" - "Final Cut"
Post a comment from one character's perspective (other than Melinda) for each assigned reading date. Relate your comment to one of the following themes:
speaking/expression
names/identity
friendship/clans
success/achievement
love/family
appearances/reality
strength/health
freedom
Post a comment from one character's perspective (other than Melinda) for each assigned reading date. Relate your comment to one of the following themes:
speaking/expression
names/identity
friendship/clans
success/achievement
love/family
appearances/reality
strength/health
freedom
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David: oh my goodness!! the basket ball game was amazing!! I mean how they made the last shot at the buzzer! wow!! but what really hurt is that I actually throw a party and the melinda wouldnt come! she looked really nervous and kind of like she was really tired but I guess I understand! what if she doesnt like me! :( Ill try and make a good impresion on her tommorow in case she doesnt like me
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ReplyDeleteAndy(It) the night of the party: There is a girl in the wood who is cute. I think she is drunk. I should make my move. Maybe she will want to. I think I will ask her to dance first. Then I will make my move on her. Maybe I should ask her name first. Nah. That don't matter................. (Evil Laugh here)
ReplyDeleteDavid: That basketball game was awesome. That last shot was so sweet. I asked Melinda if she wanted to go to my house for an after party, but she said no. She kept making excuses. Blah blah this, or my parents won't let me do that. It kinda hurt. I wish she would have come over for a couple of minutes at least. That would have been nice.
David:
ReplyDeleteWOAAAHHHHHHH! Thats was the coolest thing ever. the very last shot was incredible! I cant belive im this into basketball! Cause now im goin to go have pizza with the gang and celebrate! I saw melinda on the way out anad asked her if she wanted to go, but i guess she isnt the going out to get pizza type of girl. it looked liked something was on her mind. ill find out on Monday
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ReplyDeleteAndy:
ReplyDeleteMan what happend last night it was so crazy. I cant beleive i did that. I didnt even know her name. wow what a night. I had lots of fun. Maan i cant wait to tell my friends what i did.
David:
ReplyDeleteOMMMGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that basketball game last night was amazing!!! HA i thought we were going to lose. All of our teams suck. But we won!!!!!! I was so happy that night! And i wanted to make it even happier. I tried inviting Melinda over for Pizza after the game. But she made up excuses. My parents told me to invite only a couple people, but i told Melinda my parents told me that i could invite anyone. I lied i thought it would make me seem like cool or something. But i guess it didnt work... I am glad i bumped into her, because she was the one i wanted to come over. I think it would be cool.. Two
FRIENDS
hanging out watching movies. I guess she didnt want to become
FRIENDS
hmm...
Rachel (Melinda's 911 call):
ReplyDeleteOH MY GOSH!!! Why did Melinda call the cops. The one time we were at a party with seniors she had to mess it up. I am so happy I slapped her. I should have punched her in the face. She ruined everything.
Rachel/Rachelle:"Today I sat at the table that Melinda was at because all the tables were full and I wanted to sit next to this new girl and it was the only place to sit. So I just sat there. I hope no one noticed.
ReplyDeleteI think......
......I almost .....
.....kinda....
miss her? ..............No I don't.
Every time I see her I just remember, back when Melinda was cool, and we went to our first high school party with Tommy, my brother. I was having a great time. I got drunk for the first time and I think that's why I don't remember Melinda being with me actually at the party. I remember getting there with her, then everything after that I can't really remember being with her. I think it was because I was drunk, I heard that your memory gets kinda hazzy when you are drunk. Though maybe she wasn't with me at the party because I remember I finally found her, I wasn't really looking though. I forgot all about her. When I did see her though she had a phone up to her ear and she looked really scared. She looked like she just saw a dead body with it's head cut off and guts every where. She looked disgusted. Personally, I think that the party was just to much for her. Anyways back to the story. So after I saw her with the phone, I started to walk towards her but before I got there I saw someone grab the phone from her. At this point I was standing right next to her and the person that grabbed the phone was yelling "the cops are coming." Everyone was running for the door. I was so full of anger and embarrassment that I just slapped Melinda in the face. I don't know what came over me. All that was going through my head was that I wanted to kill Melinda because I thought that everybody was going to hate me because I brought her here and now the party was being crashed by the police because of her. Wait,... why did she even call the police. It's usually not Melinda to rat people out, so I wonder what it was. Did I do something to make her mad and she wanted to get back at me? Maybe it had something to do with that look on her face. I should have asked her what was wrong. I was just so mad at her that I didn't even think about her feelings. Now everyone in the whole school hates her. I can't be friends with her. I don't want to be hated. I don't want to be a LOSER! That's why I have to be mean to her so no one knows that I was friends with her and brought her to that party and so that no one will hate me and think it's my fault. I feel bad sometimes for being mean but I have to do what I have to do.
Sorry Melinda I have no other choice."
Andy: Woah, that party was beast. I'll always remember that night, haha there was this girl and she was really cute. Although she was drunk and i could have told. Goodness, everything went by so fast, i had a great time with her at the party. I wish i'll see her again. ;)
ReplyDeleteDavid:
Oh my God! That was unbelievable! How on earth did he make that shot!? Wow, now this is something to celebrate. Our basketball team has actually won for once! I saw Melinda in the crowd and i asked her to join me but...she seemed disturbed, scared actually. The sort of look like she is looking at me like she wants to get away. Oh well, maybe i just need to get to know her better then she will maybe hang out with me.
Rachel- I really can't beleive that Melinda called the cops. I was so mad at her. I was haveing such a great time, I was fitting in and I meet some cool people. I mean we take her to a pary and I mean my brother did and he didn't have to and i let her over to sleep at my house afterwards and what does she do call the cops. I could have got in so much trouble if I was caught. Luckly I wasn't. But I am wondering what happened to her I mean she didn't come with us did she get taken by the cops and got asked questions about the party? Did she rat me out on that how there was underage kids there drinking beer? I mean we were all having a great time. Especially me I meet this guy and his friends, they were nice. Then out of no where when the guy and me were just getting into the conversation even more a scream saying the cops are coming get out. I saw Melinda with the phone in her hand, i was so mad that I gave her the evil look and right then and there felt bettrayed that she would do that what is her problem. GOSH I WAS HAVING THE GREATEST NIGHT AND THAT LOSER MY EX BEST FRIEND NOW HAD TO RUIN IT. SHE CAN GO SOKE UP IN HER SADNESS AND FORGET ABOUT ME AND HOW CLOSE WE EVER WERE.
ReplyDeleteRachel (night of the party): I don't know what the heck happened last night! I was with the girls at the much anticipated end of the summer party at Kyle Rodger's house. I blackmailed Jimmy into driving us there. He told my mom we were going roller skating. I don't know why she bought it. I hate roller skating, and she knows that! Anyway, on the way there we wouldn't shut up. We were all so excited! I mean, it was a CHEERLEADER PARTY! One with a keg and good music. When we got inside, I stood there shell shocked. This was it! The atmosphere was amazing. It was like a scene from a movie. I felt so mature! The place oozed with coolness. We didn't really know what to do, so at first we stood by the keg. I was just standing talking to Melinda. We both decided to have a beer. It tasted fizzy and weird. I didn't really like that much, but everyone was doing it, so we had a couple more… or maybe a few more than that, but I don't really remember. I admit, I was a little tipsy. Melinda was slurring a bit when she spoke, was giggling like an idiot and had the hiccups, but she insisted on having another. It was like the one time she had too much cotton candy at the carnival. I still went to get us some more, but when I came back, she was gone. I looked around for her a bit, but she was nowhere to be seen. The property was huge, though. She could have been anywhere. I gave up and figured I would bump into her again at one point or another. Then I started socializing. I was having so much fun! I was dancing, talking with some of the most popular girls, flirting with cute boys, and I felt like I was on cloud nine! I hoped the night would never end. I decided I should go look for Mel again, because I hadn't seen her in a while. I went inside, and I finally found her standing by the phone crying. I ran up to see what was wrong, but someone cut in front of me and grabbed the phone from her. Then they screamed, "You dumba**! The cops are coming! Everybody run!" Chaos ensued. People were running, yelling, and I was scared. My dream was turning into a nightmare. I felt dizzy with the people running all around me, and I figured out then that I probably had a little too much beer. Then all of those emotions were overcome by anger. How could she do this to me? This was one of the best nights ever, and she had to ruin it. Sure, the party was a little wild, but she didn't have to call the cops. Why did she call them? She was having fun too, or at least when I was with her she was. I walked to Melinda, and I slapped her. She just stood there in shock. She looked absolutely horrible. Her hair was a mess, and her makeup was smeared. She whimpered and then started crying again. I noticed that her lip was bruised and that her clothes looked… dirty? What had happened to her? I hadn't left her alone too long, had I? When I was about to ask what the hell was running through her mind, Jimmy and the girls came up and told me that we had to run. When I looked back to see if Melinda was coming, she was gone. Jimmy grabbed my arm, and started sprinting towards the door. Ivy and Nicole had already made it to the car and were waiting on us. I had barely closed the car door when Jimmy floored it. I watched out the window as the lights from the party disappeared into the darkness.
ReplyDeleteANDY: Jesus, that was some party! Booze, chicks, it was pretty awesome! It even ended with the cops showing up, damn! Oh, and I "met" some little freshman girl, she was cute. Melinda was her name, I think. She liked it. ;)
ReplyDeleteDavid:
ReplyDeleteThat second shot! Amazing never has been done before ever. Last game who cares it was a great game. But Melinda, i really wanted her to go i could have brought anyone else. But i chose her and she turns me down i wonder why?
Andy:
Her name? i dont care. She's drunk OH yah. Will I? Hell yes! She is going to do it anything. A kiss is all it takes and soon it me and her can't breath. She soon yells STOP but now I am closer. I dont care she is so cute.
Rachel (at lunch)-
ReplyDeleteI sat down with Hana, that new exchange student, at lunch today. The only thing is, I sat at the end of Melinda's table. I hope she didn't get the wrong idea by me sitting there. There was really no where else to sit, so we sat there. It's not like I was trying to be her friend or anything. She probably thought I was. After what she did at the party, I wouldn't be seen with her even if we were dead. I would get up with my skeleton body and move away from her (if we got put in holes next to each other or something). She is such a loser. I mean, she tried to take a bit of her sandwich, and mustard squirted out. What-Ever-Major-Loser.
Rachel (at the party)-
I can not believe that Melinda called the cops. I mean, we finally get to go to a cool party, and she blows it by calling the cops. She is so stupid. I can't believe I was friends with her. I'm so not anymore. I was having so much fun, and I thought Melinda was too. But then, when that dude grabbed the phone from her and yelled cops, I walked up to her and slapped her. I was so PO'ed about it. When I saw her, she was with a senior boy. How could she have not been having fun? When I slapped her, she looked horrible. She was crying, and I thing her lip was bleeding. Maybe. . . something. . . happened. . . no, no that couldn't have happened. There is no possible way that could have happened.
David
ReplyDeleteOH MY GOODNESS!!!! That shot was amazing!!! It was an amazingg game. Afterwards, I saw Melinda, she got real funny as soon as I asked her to come to my house for pizza. I mean c'mon!! It's jjust pizza! Its not like a drug party or anything!! Just pizza!! Pizza!!!!! I don't know why she aacts so weird. I kinda like her.... I really don't know....
Andy:
ReplyDeleteMan that was one fun party. Beer and all those hot girls man. There was one really hot girl there. Man I wondered if she liked it, I bet she did. I wonder what her name name was you know what I don't even care what her name was. I do know that she was drunk so she probably doesn't even remember what happened.
Malachi
David: WOW!!! That last shot was nuts! If only I were good at sports...I would get all the babes. I wonder why Melinda said no to my invite? I thought we were becoming close...
ReplyDeleteDavid: OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! The basketball game was awesome. And the after party was so fun , and I didn't even have to kick someone out because they were drunk. I wish Melinda was there though, she is very pretty :D
ReplyDeleteDavid: That game was off the charts. However, I calculated this win so I knew it was going to happen. Still, it was great and I can't argue that. (Mind switches topic) Why did Melinda say no? Maybe I sounded too pushy? Was I pushy? Oh, I was to pushy and persuasive!!
ReplyDeleteRachel
ReplyDeleteMelinda had to screw things up for everyone by callin the 5-0. I was having such a great time....alcohol....hot seniors... AND MELINDA CALLS THE COPS!! A once in a lifetime opportunity to have a great time and Melinda has to call the cops. I'm never talking to her again. She can go talk to her new cop friends.